Template:Did you know nominations/Jerusalem, du hochgebaute Stadt
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:55, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
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Jerusalem, du hochgebaute Stadt
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- ... that "Jerusalem, du hochgebaute Stadt", a song of the New Jerusalem, was written by Johann Matthäus Meyfart, Rektor of the Casimirianum, for an academic sermon? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: TV-aksjonen
- Comment: suitable for 31 October and end of November
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 20:39, 26 October 2017 (UTC).
- Hi Gerda Arendt. Full review to follow later. A few quick comments: Some facts are mentioned in the lead but not referred to in the body and so are unreferenced, for example: numbers of stanzas, song subtitle, Gotteslob number "GL 553". The External links section looks strange to me when empty (I know it applies to the Commons template), would linking commons inline using eg. Template:Commons-inline be an improvement? Last one-line paragraph of "Melody and settings" section is unreferenced. Thanks - Dumelow (talk) 05:52, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
- Article created 20 October; Article of good length; Largely cited to German book sources and a website on which I will AGF, the English source is an online hymnal which is apparently taken direct from printed sources so is likely to be reliable, the only fact cited to it is uncontroversial anyway; Copyvio assumed not an issue as all sources have been translated; Hook is OK, is fully cited and suited to the 31 October date (for the reformation anniversary), not sure of the significance of the end of November date proposed (possibly it is when it was written, but this is not in the article)? 9 November is Meyfart's birthday also. Image is suitably licensed and works well at the scale. QPQ is still in progress but coming on well. Happy to approve once the first comment is resolved - Dumelow (talk) 17:40, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
- Will look tomorrow, - had more than enough for the feast day. 9 Nov might be a good next day to look for. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:11, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I copied from the lead and referenced. The subtitle is in the image. I expanded the compositions, pieces now instead of names of composers. Most of them ave articles. Do we need to copy the refs? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:54, 2 November 2017 (UTC)
Hi Gerda, looking good to go now. I think now the compositions section has been expanded and mentions the names of the works they are effectively cited inline, I don't see any need for a proper citation (which would only be to the work mentioned anyway). All the best - Dumelow (talk) 18:13, 2 November 2017 (UTC)
